Jealous Ghost

*UPDATE*
Okay, I got some really great critique and took their advice. I tried to make the girl's face a little more detailed and brighter to help her become the focus. Next, I made her the lightsource, so shading on her was very minimal and I tried to brighten her a bit. I extended the vines and added some foreground detail for depth. Lastly, I made her hand glowy and added some glowing balls near her face. I think I am finally done (p.s. I know her neck seems a little off, but she is in a slight 3/4 view). Yay! I am done, rejoice!

Yo. This is the first picture done in my dorm and it is the first done entirely on the computer. Look at the pretty background! I am happy with this picture, but I would like some critique before I submit it into a contest. Yup, I am very happy with this one indeed...
*realizes that class starts tomorrow and falls asleep*